Sawyer Ohman CMM110-A 10/30/23 Today was a very important day in the process of shaping our handbook, no changes were made to our website because it was the first day of peer review. Our group’s website/handbook was reviewed first. We had all of the parts and pieces that were required of us but there are still plenty of changes to be made and work to be done. I appreciated the peer review that we received, there were several small adjustments…
Sawyer Ohman CMM110-A 10/30/23 This post was very relatable to me, I love the adventure associated with fishing. You never know what might tugging at the end of your line so it’s always exciting to feel the thump of a bite. The only thing that a fisherman can do is get on the water and try his luck, it might be a pond or lake that you’ve been to before or a new body of water that you’re completely unfamiliar…
Sawyer Ohman CMM110-A 10/23/23 Our group has been very productive so far, I made a google docs with all the respective parts and pieces of the project for us to fill in. Ben and I then outlined who would be accountable for which parts of the project. Ben and I made considerable progress during our time in class, I’ve completed my big idea as well as my interviews. I wrote the main page and Ben wrote our introduction. I have…
Sawyer Ohman CMM110-A 10/22/23 This is a sale’s pitch in a social media post and the description gives the pitch for the product. The new series of ST. Croix’s inshore rods use the new A.R.T. & C.R.T. technologies to improve the overall useability. The catchy slogan “Bring Your A Game” is a good hook to get fishermen interested in the product. If you’re familiar with the brand and ST. Croix’s different series of rods one would be all the more…
Major Project #2 is now under way, Ben, Altirique and myself are a group, we have begun by organizing our document. I wrote the forward or main page which gives the reader a brief introduction to the text and keeps them interested. We struggled to define our three big lessons which we might still change yet we managed to find a way to make it sound cohesive. The next step is our introduction which we have decided to call our…
Sawyer Ohman CMM110-A 10/18/23 Q: PG194, PR5 C: I found the section related to interdependence not only to be very interesting but I think that it applies to all of the projects that we need to accomplish here in college, and later in life as well. Most of our lives we will be relying on the work that we produce to satisfy requirements in our careers. We will be asked to make deadlines and spend time doing work outside of…
Sawyer Ohman CMM110-A 10/15/23 This post spoke to me particularly, I noticed that ST. Croix was not trying to push their product line very hard. Rather this post shows to me that the company is being thoughtful of the environment. This is a striped bass, my favorite fish to catch. Their reproductive cycle is rather slow in comparison to smaller schooling fish and therefore they are heavily regulated. For a fish to become this large it must survive nearly twenty…
Sawyer Ohman CMM110-A 10/12/23 Journal #11 (PGS 213-214) This passage primarily made me very curious about the organizations that I am aware of that could be thought of as machines or cultures. I primarily thought of the United States of America. We have our own culture one could argue but within our borders we have thousands of individual cultures interacting with each other. Furthermore I thought of the American military forces. This is an organization of different branches of our…
Sawyer Ohman CMM110-A 10/9/23 BLOG-PROJ #4 ST. Croix is doing a lot of marketing in this post trying to sell their newest series of rod the Avid Inshore series. There are several different variations for every different kind of fishing and fisherman and they have a quote from a charter captain Justin Carter. Not only have the Avid series rods received a professional seal of approval, but Justin explains some of the technical modifications made to the new series of…
The Lone Wolf Speech was a great opportunity to better understand the process of revision, as well as public speaking. Brainstorming for ideas was the first step of the process, I chose the topic of personal improvement so that was my diving platform. I asked myself what I wanted my life to be like in the future and what I could do to change myself. Personal goals and support systems were my main agenda. All of this is well and…
