Journal #15
Sawyer Ohman
CMM110-A
10/30/23
Today was a very important day in the process of shaping our handbook, no changes were made to our website because it was the first day of peer review. Our group’s website/handbook was reviewed first. We had all of the parts and pieces that were required of us but there are still plenty of changes to be made and work to be done. I appreciated the peer review that we received, there were several small adjustments that needed to be made on the website to keep things consistent. We also want to work towards making the website more user friendly, it is somewhat difficult to navigate and improvements can be made. I personally need to rewrite big idea number three, skylar made a very good point that what was written is to be example centered, and I need to provide more of a definition.