Blog-Proj #5

Blog-Proj #5

Sawyer Ohman CMM110-A 10/15/23 This post spoke to me particularly, I noticed that ST. Croix was not trying to push their product line very hard. Rather this post shows to me that the company is being thoughtful of the environment. This is a striped bass, my favorite fish to catch. Their reproductive cycle is rather slow in comparison to smaller schooling fish and therefore they are heavily regulated. For a fish to become this large it must survive nearly twenty…

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Journal #11

Journal #11

Sawyer Ohman CMM110-A 10/12/23 Journal #11 (PGS 213-214) This passage primarily made me very curious about the organizations that I am aware of that could be thought of as machines or cultures. I primarily thought of the United States of America. We have our own culture one could argue but within our borders we have thousands of individual cultures interacting with each other. Furthermore I thought of the American military forces. This is an organization of different branches of our…

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Blog-Proj #4

Blog-Proj #4

Sawyer Ohman CMM110-A 10/9/23 BLOG-PROJ #4 ST. Croix is doing a lot of marketing in this post trying to sell their newest series of rod the Avid Inshore series. There are several different variations for every different kind of fishing and fisherman and they have a quote from a charter captain Justin Carter. Not only have the Avid series rods received a professional seal of approval, but Justin explains some of the technical modifications made to the new series of…

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Journal #10

Journal #10

The Lone Wolf Speech was a great opportunity to better understand the process of revision, as well as public speaking. Brainstorming for ideas was the first step of the process, I chose the topic of personal improvement so that was my diving platform. I asked myself what I wanted my life to be like in the future and what I could do to change myself. Personal goals and support systems were my main agenda. All of this is well and…

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Journal #9

Journal #9

Sawyer Ohman CMM110-A 10/2/23 Journal #9 Cuddy is a professor of business and she is very interested in the differences between her students and how their body language relates to their class participation. She has found that there are two types of students in her classroom, those that are eager to raise their hands and participate, and those who would rather remain silent or not fully engaged in class communication. Not only did Cuddy find that this had a relationship…

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BLOG-PROJ #3

BLOG-PROJ #3

Sawyer Ohman CMM110-A 10/2/23 Blog-Proj #3 This post I found particularly appealing to myself, not often do you see such an impressive specimen of this species of fish. Smallmouth bass, the fish being held up by this angler, is endemic to the northern United States and Canada. They are found in nearly any kind of freshwater ecosystem, from large lakes to tiny streams. St. Croix made this post and asked their audience what was the largest bass they had caught….

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Journal #8

Journal #8

Sawyer Ohman CMM110-A 9/29/23 Journal #8 The speech that I gave was well done, but it was very long. Part of the problem was I hadn’t rehearsed my speech enough. I ended up repeating points that I had already made. My peers’ feedback helped me to understand that I need to organize my thoughts in a more straightforward way. As well as repeating myself I also used a lot of filler words such as “like” and “umm”. This slows my…

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Journal #7

Journal #7

Sawyer Ohman CMM110-A 9/25/23 MY BEST ADVICE: The best advice I gave was to Kit, their speech was about bettering their personal self. I enjoyed her speech but they needed to work more on the delivery of their speech. Of course it was one of the first times they had read the speech especially to an audience, but it didn’t flow. The speech was very well written but Kit found it was difficult to read the page out loud word…

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Week #2

Week #2

Sawyer Ohman CMM110-A 9/13/23 BLOG-PROJ Week #2 I enjoyed this post a lot, my father would take me fishing all the time when I was very young. Even when I was too young to hold a rod I was on the boat with my family watching my father and mother take turns reeling in fish. St. Croix is attempting to make a personal connection with people who are passionate about fishing. Whether they would go out fishing with their mother…

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